pennsicdance: Re: proofreaders needed

[Keith McClune]

Hi there:

> It turns out that the Pennsic "by subject" listing of classes also has
> errors. Can I get some volunteer proofreaders?

Here's what I found:

Gregory's "Caroso-Style Ball" is listed for 8/6 in the A&S Descriptions, but
8/11 (both places) on the Pennsic Dance Class Homepage

Lyev's "Bouffons" is still listed at 10 am (8/9) in the A&S Descriptions
(changed to 9 am on the Pennsic Dance Class page).

Gregory's "Teaching Dance" 8/11 at 10 am is not listed in the A&S Descriptions.

Justinian Timagenes's "Playford Period?" (11 am 8/11) is listed in the A&S
Descriptions but does not appear on the Pennsic Dance Class Homepage.

The A&S Descriptions lists Catalana di Neri teaching "Beginning Dance" 8/11 at 4
pm, the Pennsic Dance Class page shows TBA (looking for a substitute teacher).

Henry's "Jump Around" is offered 8/8 and 8/12 on the Pennsic Dance Class
Homepage, but the A&S Descriptions only shows it on 8/8.

Lyev's "Dance with style and grace..." 8/12 at noon, the A&S Descriptions text
is re-arranged and incomplete.  It should include "Since the emphasis is on 15th
c. Italian dance, a basic understanding of it ..."  instead of "Since the
emphasis is on, a basic understanding of 15th c. Italian dance ..."  Also, the
phrase "For all levels of experience" is missing from the A&S Descriptions.  The
"see also" line is missing from both classes in the A&S Descriptions, but I
think this is a valid editorial cut.

Henry's "La Gaillarde" is listed on 8/9 (11am) and 8/14 (10am) on the Pennsic
Dance Class Homepage, but the A&S Descriptions only shows it on 8/9.

Rosanore of Redthorn's "Old Measures" (8/14 2 pm) is not listed in the A&S
Descriptions.

Thursday night's "English Revel" (9 pm 8/4) is not listed in the A&S
Descriptions.  The other Balls are listed in the A&S Descriptions, but the
party's are not (so this may be omitted because it is a party).

Lyev's "Reconstructing Dances from the Period Sources" (8/15 noon) is untitled
on the Pennsic Dance Class Homepage.  (The text in the A&S Descriptions is also
more complete.)

So many interesting classes - I wish I could be there!

Keith / Guillaume   S:}>