minstrel: Lyric re-write

Rex Deaver rdeaver at cgro.com
Mon Jul 21 05:57:58 PDT 1997


At 07:04 PM 7/20/97 -0400, CONSORTMUS at aol.com wrote:

>Come away, come sweet love, the golden morning breaks.
>All the earth, all the air of love and pleasure speaks.
>Teach thine arms then to embrace
>and sweet rosy lips to kiss
>and mix our souls in mutual bliss.
>             (???? 7 syllables, should rhyme with "embrace."?????)

"Trust that fragile heart keeps pace"

Just a suggestion.

Mathurin

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Rex Deaver
rdeaver at cgro.com	
"Fix the problem. Not the blame."


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