minstrel: Re: Need some critique

[J. Michael Shew]

	You are right in most cases.  I am torn between my usual Norse
verse styles and the more "loose" modern musical style.  However, I might
need to look into you comments.  They seem a bit less involved than my own
proposed changes!
	Thanks!
	Mikal

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    Mikal the Ram; an annoying Bard of no redeeming qualities
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	That he is bright, let no man boast
	But take good heed of his tounge
	The silent sage , will seldom need grief
	They are honored here in the hall
	A friend more faithful, you will never find
	Than a shrewd head on your shoulders
			The Hamaval  (translation mine)



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